Thread:TienShenLong/@comment-779290-20150907164013/@comment-779290-20150909141840

Most of what I have seen you write has been much longer than required; you use paragraphs where most other people use senteces. After writing something you should review it with the following questions in mind:  Can this be clearly stated with less words? Is there any repetition? Is there anything extra or unnecessary?

1/2. An introduction is meant to be an overview, which is the opposite of detailed explanations, and is focussed on different audiences. Mixing the two together makes it much less useful for everyone. Therefore, if we  have a detailed walkthrough it should be at least a separate section, probably a separate page.

3. I have not seen any detailed walkthroughs for any of the myriad of functions required to play DC, nor questions looking for that level of detail on any of the forums. I think our efforts would be better spend on things that help more people. There is a basics section on the menu and the Introduction page has a link to Tips for Beginners.

4. Good point on filtering the categories. Unfortunately I don't think its possible; the list is automatically generated by Wikia. You can get some idea by looking at how many pages are a member of a given category. Also,some category pages have explanations on them.

I could not decipher most of what you were trying to say about problems. The Training Center page is done the same way as the Stadium page. I agree the Attacks page needs work, and that might affect what we want on the Training Center page.